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Poem: She lingered about a little & as I watched her spirit Glide & dance around her Sunflowers crashed her shoulders Subtle-breaths covered By consciousness hid away The grand joy that her sight had spelled a soft parade of prayers half dance...
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Laughing and full of passion was our talk But I dont belong here nor there Your hand crosses oceans of time to haunt me & I dont belong here or there Before the sun comes up & we leave this empty house into the cold morning we sand and l...
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Walking through the park I stood quietly in the dark Something supicious Something specious caught my eye A black veiled chair salient there, between the trees approaching it I could see a man hair w/ fine clothes I levitated by the ground ...
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Walking through the park I stood quietly in the dark Something supicious Something specious caught my eye A black veiled chair salient there, between the trees approaching it I could see a man hair w/ fine clothes I levitated by the ground ...
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I'm working on this song right now Saturday-night lights, bright Saturday-night lights, so bright Emilys' going to shore, to see the lights they shine so bright blessed are those that feel they belong Saturday night lights, bright Saturday ...
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I like late spring when it's warm but not too warm ; it's ideal weather to me - I think that most people like it when it's not too cold or too hot, what do you think Emma? I think that that weather makes me feel serene - so it does inspire me , bu...
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City, State, Country
Canoga park Ca
My Website
myspace.com/thesubtlepoet
My Favorite Poet(s)
Jack Kerouac, jim Morrison, Oscar Wilde, Morrissey
I am a published poet
No
Why I Write Poetry
I like to express myself and throw off the banal perceptions that are embeded in our collective psyche.
Why I Read Poetry
because i like to use my imagination and like the feelings i get from reading it, like: epiphany, empathy and many other moods and feelings.
About Me
Work in progress

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Sunflower

Poem:

She lingered about a little

& as I watched her spirit
Glide & dance around her
Sunflowers crashed her shoulders
Subtle-breaths covered
By consciousness hid away

The grand joy that her sight had spelled

a soft parade of prayers
half danced & walked away
through the sun drenched seconds
of that day

She half stranger, half friend. . .
didn't want to let it slant that way

"Smile my way"

Posted on June 24, 2009 at 1:20am —

The Subtle-poet

Poem 30

Laughing and full of passion

was our talk

But I dont belong here nor there


Your hand crosses oceans of time to haunt me

& I dont belong here or there


Before the sun comes up

& we leave this empty house

into the cold morning

we sand and laughed & danced

before the sun was out

before the cold light

In this pillowed vesel

I dont belong here or there

or anywhere

where you had me you had me
& where I had you ; I had you

and it'll never be the same again

Those echoes… Continue

Posted on June 21, 2009 at 2:56am —

The Subtle-poet

Poem 29

Walking through the park
I stood quietly
in the dark

Something supicious
Something specious

caught my eye

A black veiled chair
salient there, between the trees


approaching it
I could see a man

hair
w/ fine clothes

I levitated by the ground

a man so serious


it's curious
his words - muttered

I felt like butter


blue & red butterflies lingered about his coat

he muttered & tacitly explained

I couldn't know
At times he was seeming vying

venal

inclining with his manners

I coul… Continue

Posted on May 3, 2009 at 1:30am —

The Subtle-poet

Poem 28

A hulk full of lulls
carries me down the hall
low music and a world full of hurt revealed
through the cracks
bloom

through the rooms
Hauled down the hall to the brown leaves
this pill wont kill
or hurt

who are you
far and full of wonder
going under

Walking to the autumn-spring forest
pink-path

The forest leaves brown
cracks serenly letting in the melodic-light
what a day for a stroll and levitation

the music sings so softly below my ears
there's time to stop and stare
at your countanance on… Continue

Posted on April 4, 2009 at 7:33pm —

The Subtle-poet

Poem 27 : Blue club

"I'm always derision"
- it's always rueful"




my soul turns slowly through the dark electric hall

blue club

heavy breathing

your eyes shined like the outside lights

as my mouth gapes open

the whole world crashing
letting out a silent sound

hanging by a meaty string
the smallest crack
hangs so heavy
on my back

and it comes back
with the electronic subtle sky

subtle in my mind
your hand
my mind
an electronic crucifixion


always at the periphery of the room

no matter how much i move ; o… Continue

Posted on March 5, 2009 at 4:48am —

 
 

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