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This world’s a villain, do be careful, It hinders all our happiness and love, It wants us all to be down, be careful, O’ Lovers be cautious with this love, O’ Man I’m in love, I’m very careful, The love bug is here, I want this love, The bite o...
November 16
HI DEB !!!!!!! PLEASE READ AND GIVE YOUR INPUT ON MY LATEST POEMS THAT I HAVE POSTED ON MY PAGE !!!!!! THANKING YOU IN ANTICIPATION !!!!
November 16
DEB !!!!!!! PLEASE READ AND GIVE YOUR INPUT ON MY LATEST POEMS THAT I HAVE POSTED ON MY PAGE !!!!!! THANKING YOU IN ANTICIPATION !!!!
November 16
Rizwan Majid Sandhu added 2 blog posts
November 3
An interesting piece. I note that in the line where you say, "Entirety’s in the cradle before you came," you've made "Entirety" a possessive which doesn't make sense in that line. I think it should read, "Entirety in the cradle..." (just remove th...
October 14
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O’ Merchants of Hate! Why did you come, Our life was so pleasant before you came, Hey, hey look! You called ruin to come, Entirety’s in the cradle before you came, I will certainly call pals of sanity to come, You will repent the very reason you...
October 13
Thanks Deb for your kind input, you are such a nice friend, you certainly made my day. Please feel free to give your precious input, I ain't in no hurry, take your time, as much as you need ............ I didn't hope that my poetry would get the r...
October 7
Please suggest the ending stanza, that completes the expression Deb, I would highly apreciate your input! I agree with you, i was having probelms in ending probelms ending the peice ...... this is what i managed, after much thought and delibaratio...
October 7
I followed your expression in this piece, up until the ending stanza...I don't feel the ending wraps up the flow of this piece....I might suggest a different ending stanza that completes the expression... Nicely written.
October 6
Hi Rizwan - Reading this piece, I fully understand what you are saying here, it is an uncomplicated piece which speaks the matter of your heart, truly expressive. I would like to read this piece with a bit more depth with some more interpretative ...
October 6
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September 1
Rizwan Majid Sandhu added a blog post
Once there was a time I wanted you, You were in me so nothing mattered, I got you when I least expected you, You were the one that truly mattered, All that I had I gave it up to have you, I wanted a goal; that’s what mattered, I had a vision; I...
August 31

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City, State, Country
Lahore, Punjab, Pakistan
I am a published poet
No
Why I Write Poetry
It is a self-reflection and therapy for me, it helps me express myself fully and effictively.
About Me
I am an art lover, a person who likes to meet new people. I'm a musicaholic and play the guitar. I'm writing my first book titled "The world around me."

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Rizwan Majid Sandhu

Poem: This World.

This world’s a villain, do be careful,
It hinders all our happiness and love,

It wants us all to be down, be careful,
O’ Lovers be cautious with this love,

O’ Man I’m in love, I’m very careful,
The love bug is here, I want this love,

The bite of this love bug is careful,
It is so wonderful, it injects the love,

I feel butterflies, I’m so very careful,
Give me your love, all I need is love,

Love is life, please be very careful,
It is a very precious thing this love,

It hurts and feels so go… Continue

Posted on November 16, 2009 at 11:15pm —

Rizwan Majid Sandhu

Poem: Life

What is a life one might ask,
It is whatever we want to make it,

How to spend it, one might ask,
Virtue is the only way to make it,

What is joy, someone might ask,
Happiness is what really makes it,

Why eyes sparkle, one might ask,
Tears are the thing that makes it,

Why tears give pain, one might ask,
Tears are the virtue that makes it,

What are these tears, one might ask,
Disappointments are what makes it,

What is sanity one might ask,
Controlling fears is what makes it.

---------------… Continue

Posted on November 3, 2009 at 5:42am —

Rizwan Majid Sandhu

Poem : Dear

Dear! I can’t understand what you are,
Something clean or a clumsy whimsical,

I don’t know where on the land you are,
A reality, fiddle, riddle or just whimsical,

You aren’t here but in my mind you are,
Everything is spinning into a whimsical,

A grand tune of enigma is what you are,
You exist in a thing that’s a whimsical,

A lovely flower on a tree is what you are,
Your scent is driving wild the whimsical,

The essence of my life is what you are,
You’re the key that opens the whimsical,

All… Continue

Posted on November 3, 2009 at 5:41am —

Rizwan Majid Sandhu

Poem: Merchants of Hate.

O’ Merchants of Hate! Why did you come,
Our life was so pleasant before you came,

Hey, hey look! You called ruin to come,
Entirety in the cradle before you came,

I will certainly call pals of sanity to come,
You will repent the very reason you came,

Love just ran! You just told hate to come,
You’ve been lying, I know why you came,

You want your partners-in-crime to come,
You are just starry-eyed that they came,

This cheer is very brief, virtue will come,
There is nothing here for which you… Continue

Posted on October 13, 2009 at 1:00am — 1 Comment

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At 9:13pm on August 28, 2009, Deborah Simpson, Author said…
Hi Rizwan and welcome to the Lounge
 
 

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