A Challenge for David Supper - Participation by all members required

[Deborah Simpson, Author]

David, I would like to post a challenge for you here on the lounge. Please post your favorite poem of all time that you have written as a comment to this forum post.

Members of the Lounge: Please post your thoughts about David's Poem.

[The Subtle-poet]

I like it alot ; I can totally understand what you're writting about ; I think about it more often now that i'm 30, then when I was 20 something. Life seems to be getting worst (physically) but like your line said " but not the mind", I would like to think of getting older the same way.
It so sad that people that we love to see pass away. I could only imagen that now ; and I know it's going to hurt.
It's poignant - I'll say it again I like it.
Is this free verse - i'm still getting into the whole meter and rhyme techniques. Sorry if I sound lazy.
i'm glad this site has a link to all the different types of set styles.
Much love:),

-H: